Consider how you link your paragraphs together and how you arrive at conclusions.  Academic writing is about a phenomenon you are presenting to the reader and requires a narrative that takes the reader along a well-articulated path, which is founded in specific academic writing principles.  Academic writing is not about a data dump of stuff because you are in a hurry.  You have to explain to the reader that you know why you say this.  Do you say it because you heard this is trendy nowadays?  Try to defend your argument by providing a logical flow of the argument.  REMEMBER: You are not with the reader to explain to the reader what you mean when the reader has questions. Therefore, you need to provide the reader with all the information the reader needs, backed by authoritative sources (citations).