You should link your sentences together. For example, this section focuses on the findings and the next section contains recommendations based on these findings.  Tell me what I am going to read next!  You need to provide context to the reader; you do this to 'knit' your storyline together.  Also, have an 'Introduction' in a new section – every time! Introduce each topic nicely – you should not just jump in and start talking.  In this section, the researcher will explain… And conclude again at the end.  Tell me what you are going to tell me, then tell me, then tell me what you told me., every time, have an 'Introduction' in a new section.